Sunday, 30 January 2011

Weekly Wordzzle 139 and 140

Work pretty much scuppered my writing of a Wordzzle last week but, in order to remain true to my challenge never to miss one, I've combined last week's and this week's words to create a kind of bumper edition: 2 minis and a 20-word episode of Harold.

The words were really hard to fit into Harold's story both weeks, so please excuse the utterly ocntrived nature of some of the writing.

Go here to see other players' contributions and next week's words.

A Mini (athlete, trading places, launch, ownership, trample )

“Imagine trading places with someone completely different from yourselves,” boomed the voice of motivation “guru” Alvin Allbright from the TV set.

“I’m imaginin’, but it ain’t ‘appenin’” Jeered Big Bob. Every man there laughed, apart from a well-fed-looking blond man, who just looked scared, his eyes darting around the room nervously.

“Imagine being an Olympic athlete,” Allbright continued, “Tensely crouched in the starting blocks, maybe, or an astronaut sitting in the space shuttle about to launch. You could be an explorer or mountain-climber…”

“I did some explorin’ once, that’s how I ended up ‘ere!” Bob continued. His friends bellowed their appreciation at his wit. The blond man picked up a newspaper and pretended to read.

“I’m willing to bet” Allbright went on, “that not one of you imagined for yourselves a life of accountancy, retail sales or road-mending, and yet these are the very lives you all have. You should take full ownership of your dreams before life comes along to trample on them with the hob-nailed boots of economic expediency and safe routine. My Programme – Seven Steps to Success…”

Bob reached up and switched off the TV with a muttered expletive.

“I never dreamt of ending up banged up in ‘ere, neither,” he growled, snatching the newspaper out of the blond man’s hands. “An’ I bet you didn’t neither, did you, Alvin!”

Another Mini (ambition, charter, bug spray, business as usual, cheap )

It was more or less business as usual that Wednesday afternoon. My two o’clock had cancelled (this was happening more and more of late what with the recession and all) so I was looking forward to giving the old plane a little leisurely overdue TLC. So who should come wandering in, reeking of an aftershave that smelt worse than cheap bug spray, but Ernie Poxmeyer. A ‘businessman’ of soaring ambition, limitless greed and complete moral vacuity. He wanted to charter the plane, however, and well, beggars can’t be choosers, so I took his money and we were soon in the air. Once out over the lake, he suddenly slid open the little window on his side, threw out the little briefcase he’d been cradling in his lap the whole time and slammed the window shut again. He turned to me and growled into his mike. “That never happened, right?” I nodded. Right.

A 20-worder (sunset, open sesame, spectacles, icicles, chanting, proposal, jade carving, earphones, growing old, parallelogram, kissing cousins, macaroni and cheese, chasm, orange glow, bucket list, eucalyptus, charged, handy, superior)

New to Harold? Catch up here

It was past sunset when Agent Moon opened the heavy glass front door to his apartment block and stepped into the porch. As he fished about in his pocket for his key to the door leading into the entrance lobby proper, he caught sight of a movement reflected in the glass in front of him. Tugging out his earphones (the soundtrack of Kissing Cousins would have to wait), he turned round to see a rather scruffy-looking man of about his own age approaching, toting a large sports bag. The man's unfashionably long black hair flopped over his spectacles with every step as he bounced up the steps. He pushed open the outer door.

“Excuse me,” the newcomer gasped, “I’ve gone and left my building key in my apartment. Do you mind if I come inside with you? I'd really appreciate it.”

Moon wasn’t keen. He didn’t know this man. Granted, he didn’t know many of the people in his building, but he thought he’d seen most of them around at least. This fellow he had not seen, and didn't quite like the look of, although he didn't seem to be drunk or whacked out on drugs or anything. Anyway, in the confines of the porch, it was going to be difficult to stop him if he really wanted in. Moon shrugged.

“Sure,” He applied his key to the lock.

Open Sesame!” said the stranger, theatrically..

“What?” Moon turned, frowning. This guy was beginning to creep him out.

“Oh, nothing,” said the stranger with an apologetic little laugh. “Sorry. Just something my old Dad used to say." He glanced at his watch, "It was really handy you turning up when you did, I didn't fancy having to hang around till morning.”

Moon grunted, turned the key and pushed the door open.

At this hour, the lobby was dim and quiet, and smelt faintly of floor cleaner and eucalyptus. A long polished oak counter ran down one side where, during the day, the concierge sat grumpy sentinel. Behind the counter was a bank of pigeon holes for residents’ mail.

Moon skirted the counter and collected his letters – two bills, yet more junk mail from Bucket List Superior Holidays (how he wished he’d not left his details on their website!) and a poor photocopy of a proposal by the building’s residents committee on tackling the rats in the basement, detailing who much everyone would be charged for their eradication.

When he turned around again, the stranger was strolling towards the building’s single elevator, his heels clicking on the polished black and white parallelogram-patterned tiles. Moon followed. He was not entirely happy about having to share the elevator car with this odd fellow, but there was only the one car and he didn’t fancy the stairs.

The stranger pushed the call button. The elevator emitted a soft bong, the doors slid open and the two men got in.

“Which floor?” asked Moon, hand hovering over the button panel.

“Oh, er, seven, please.” replied the stranger.

Moon jabbed seven, then his own, six. The doors wheezed closed and the car began its groaning and rattling ascent. Not being the most modern or rapid of transports, the journey took the best part of a minute, which both men spent in slightly awkward silence. The stranger glanced at his watch again, Moon noticed.  At last the elevator stopped and Moon was able to step out into his familiar hallway. He hurried along to his own door and, with some relief, heard the lift doors close and the machinery start up once more. Once safely inside his own appartment, Moon relaxed.

"You're growing old and paranoid," he said to himself as he dropped his keys into the conveniently-shaped lap of a jade carving of the Buddha which sat on the hall table. "That guy was just a guy that got locked out, nothing more."

He wandered into the kitchen area.

There was nothing in the freezer but a few icicles and a macaroni and cheese ready meal which had been there for some time. With a sigh, and a promise to himself to go shopping the next day, Moon extracted it, removed the packaging and tossed the unappetising thing into the microwave to heat before flopping onto the couch and turning on the TV.

A documentary about some volcano was showing, and over the sound of ritualistic chanting, the narrator was just describing how the mountain had been sacred to the locals, who would make sacrifice to their gods by hurling people and animals into the fiery chasm at the mountain's heart. The man's face was sweating and flushed, bathed in the lurid orange glow coming from the crater behind him.

The hum of the microwave mixed with the chanting and the smooth tones of the presenter in a pleasingly soporific way, and Moon soon felt himself slipping toward sleep, only to be startled awake by the shrill beep of the microwave, alerting him to the fact that his dinner was ready.


In the stairwell leading down to the sixth floor, the black-haired stranger knelt down, placed his sports bag carefully on the floor and unzipped it. At once, a small grey shape clambered out of the opening.

"About perishing time, too!" grumbled Teatime, "I was almost suffocating in there."

"Nonsense," laughed Harold, "You were fine. Anyway, we're in!"

"Hmph, well, anyway.  Do you think he suspected anything?"

"Nope," said Harold proudly, "I think I convinced him I was some oddball living on seventh." He pulled off the black wig and glasses, and allowed his face to resume its usual shape and colouration. He'd worked hard all afternoon on a suitable disguise but, with his limited abilities, had just about managed to get to the stage where he could only reliably hold his new face for a short period of time – hence the incessant clock-watching. As hair had proved too tricky a proposition altogether, a wig had been found, and the spectacles were added as an extra layer of distraction, just in case.

"Right then, old Sock, let's get busy," said Teatime.


  1. Brava! Loved both minis and you wove all TWENTY awful, nearly impossible words flawlessly into Harold. Can't wait to find out what comes next. I kept muttering. "Wish I had thought of that" through each entry, especially how you got rid of those irksome Kissing Cousins.

  2. Oh I was glad to see your post - I was quite bereft without a Harold last week. You did a great job with all the words. Can't wait to see what Harold & Teatime do with Mr. Moon.

  3. ooh - and double ooh...

    Intriguing stories all - love the cliffhanger and misdirection of Harold, and the story of the briefcase on the plane is tantalizing

  4. Raven - You're too kind! Although I generally don't do megas any more, it wasn't much more difficult getting the 20 words in than it was for the 10, go figure!

    Bug - Thanks! I was annoyed with myself for not getting it done in time but, meh!

    DFTP - Thanks, the plane story is NOT going to continue - I have my hands full with Harold.

  5. I enjoyed all your stories. The mini story with the self-help guru had an unexpected ending, and it looks like he got a surprise too. The mini with the plane and the briefcase was very interesting. It could fit in as the beginning of a longer story, or the end of one, or someplace in the middle. The Harold story was a very nice episode, and I didn't suspect that the mysterious stranger was Harold, or that Teatime was in the bag. I went back and read all the episodes of the story that I missed, and got up to date on it. It has been going along very well, with interesting twists and many nice touches.

    I also liked the cartoons you have been posting.

    Stephen from Scottsdale, Arizona, USA

  6. Stephen - It's lovely to hear from you again. Thanks for taking the time out to do all that reading, and for the thoughtful comments. Hope to read more of your posts soon.


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