Saturday, 22 May 2010

Saturday Wordzzle 110

The words weren't quite so troublesome this week, I'm happy to say, although I have resorted to the low tactic of including the words in street signs and names of businesses.

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The mini (muscle spasms, charter boat, sunshine, microwave oven, ample bosoms)

This is part of an ongoing story about a young blind seer who has had a vision of danger befalling a young man.  She arranges to anonymously fund a holiday for him - only to discover she's sent him to the place where the danger was supposed to be. She catches up with him and they talk. Suddenly, a car comes careering round the corner of the road and, in his attampt to push the blind lady out of its path, the young man in injured.  He wakes in hospital, having lost his memory. His only visitor thus far has been the seer.

The seer speaks:

I was not always blind. I remember the look of bright summer sunshine on blue-green water. I remember lying on the deck of my father's charter boat, staring up unto the clean bowl of the sky, imagining myself, like thousands of children before me, falling, up, up and away into the blue. That was before the virus, the muscle spasms, the fever and the swallowing darkness. One of my very last genuine sight-memories is of a pair of kindly blue eyes above the starched brilliance of a nurse's uniform stretched over ample bosoms, a pair of plump hands cradling a steaming bowl of Oxtail soup fresh from the microwave oven. I was too sick to eat and, to this day, the smell of Oxtail soup repels me. Ian is both saddened and amused by this, I can hear it in his voice, even as I can hear his spoon dipping into his bowl for another mouthful.

The 10-worder (solar power, rooster, all God's children go to Heaven, prosperity, savage, cucumber salad, drizzle and fog, false teeth, library books, trench)

New to Harold? The summary is here.

Behind him, Harold heard the startled shouts of the humans plus the screech of one very indignant monkey which had just been dumped without ceremony onto the grimy concrete.

He had no time to spare for them now.

He had to get himself as far away as possible. The rhythm of his feet pounding the pavement brought the words of a chant into his head and he found himself running in time to it: one-two-three-four-five-six-seven. All God's children go to Heaven. One-two-three-four... He pushed this irrelevance aside and tried to remember where he'd seen the safe place, it had to be around here somewhere...

"I knew it!" cried India as Harold suddenly shot past her and out the door, "It's getting away!" Taser in hand, she set off after him.

"What?" Mercury and Othello spun round in surprise, having been intent on the crumpled old speeding ticket they had found.

"The demon's making a break for it!" this was from Prada as she herself ran toward the doorway.

"Helluva time to pull a stunt like that," grumbled Othello as he and Mercury followed.

"Wait!" cried Teatime, but it was too late.

Harold was not strong as demons went but he was fast and had soon put several streets between himself and the crumbling old building. This was not a good neighbourhood, its days of prosperity were well behind it. It was a wasteland of failed businesses and broken dreams, a desolate sprawl of padlocked doors and smashed windows. Even the gangs didn't bother coming here any more, such was the spirit of listless despair that hung around the place.

Where was it?

Harold rounded a corner, passing the shuttered windows of Sweetman's Cafe - Cucumber salad a speciality and Bergdorf Solar Power and Light Inc, now ironically in total darkness. Sale of Surplus Library Books! shouted a hand-painted sign as he flashed past. He was close now, he was sure. Rooster and Trench – False Teeth and Dental Supply Company proclaimed a faded hoarding to his left. Yes! He was almost there now, just down this street: he'd seen it on the way in.

"Darn it!" India skidded to a stop in the empty street. Of the fleeing demon, there was no sign. "I knew it couldn't be trusted." There was a savage edge to her voice, "I just knew it!"

Beside her, Mercury sighed and shook his head. "Guess you were right after all." he said, "I have to hand it to that demon though, he had me fooled. I really thought he was helping us."

"It was just biding its time, obviously." added Prada, "Now what?"

"Well, we've still got –" began Mercury.

The bomb exploded.

Glass and brick fragments and clods of earth flew everywhere, and the air immediately filled with a great spreading cloud of choking dust. Where the bomb had been, there was now a large hole in the ground as if a giant had wielded a great big invisible spoon, scooping up the earth. Knocked flat by the blast, Harold could only watch helplessly as shards of glass and lumps of masonry rained down on him from out of the smoke, the whole thing a weird sort of drizzle and fog. He'd still been too close to the bomb when it had gone off and he would be going nowhere until his vessel had repaired itself. He closed his eyes. It was such a pity that humans weren't as durable.


  1. Oh my! The blind seer was pure poetry this week... and Harold... I don't know how to feel about him... I guess he couldn't save the others, but I wish he had tried... but then he's a demon even if he is a relatively lovable demon...

    I thought your use of the words was especially brilliant and flowing this week. Like you, I hope some of our fallen wordzzlers will return to the fold. I miss them.

  2. Thanks Raven! It help this week that I had a clear idea of what I wanted to happen in the stories. Most weeks, I only have a vague notion and that actually makes fitting the words in much harder for me. I'm tempted to go visit the blogs of our absent friends and remind them that you're still setting the challenge every week. I know people have busy lives and all, but we had such a good group going there.

  3. Well I didn't see that one coming! Can't wait to see what happens next week...

    And Raven's right about the seer story - lovely.

  4. @Bug - Thank you. The Seer story piece just fell into place for once, no effort required and that may be why it seems more poetic than usual. Don't forget to tune in next week :-)

  5. Oh my god!!.. are they dead?.. and teatime?.. loved the way you worked the words in, very kool! especially "all god's children go to heaven"... I'm aghasted again!

  6. Thanks for the kind words (I am a needy git at times). Are they dead? Tune in on Saturday...


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